Topic: Challenging Indian poets: help in Indian nursery rhymes
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jaish

Sat 05/14/22 03:48 AM

Nursery rhymes are not for nothing. In fact, English has dominated our schools because of the range of poems for children. - so inducing

While this topic requires some analyses, please note the tragedy of our children learning: ‘Baa, baa, black sheep’ – considering there are no black sheep in the world; yet I hear kids chorusing with gusto. Who cares whatever the nonexistent sheep sells, as long as we can raise a din.

Perhaps instead of throwing such powerful melodies we should adapt it to:

Baa, baa white sheep, have you any wool?
Yes sir, yes sir, three bags full.
Moo, moo, brown cow, have you any milk?
Yes sir, yes sir, two jars full

Pithy.

Then I thought of one with choo, choo steam engine, locomotive. Late & outdated.

Long time ago, I sent a similar message to an Indian the gist being: Instead of wooing and getting wooed with your God gifted talent can you please, please write some poems for our children?
AT least 1 poem. After all, generosity begins at home. More melodies serenades in the Poems forums. I received Silence.

Now, as I develop this booklet for kids, these not-so-little things, hit hard. So much encouragement from Tom, Crystal and recently Bonnie. Takes the booklet to a new level.

Apart from the poets, also to the 3-letter-word geniuses (truly admirable) - I appeal openly.

flowerforyou
Edited by jaish on Sat 05/14/22 03:59 AM
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Slim gym

Sat 05/14/22 04:51 AM

I was always considered the 'black " sheep of the family ... thanks for letting me know where that originated from .... feels good knowing that's not even true . But then again , it's probably better than being the 'rebel' of the family ....wait?? Could that be the same difference ha ha !!!!
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jaish

Sat 05/14/22 05:23 AM


I was always considered the 'black " sheep of the family ... thanks for letting me know where that originated from .... feels good knowing that's not even true . But then again , it's probably better than being the 'rebel' of the family ....wait?? Could that be the same difference ha ha !!!!


Now that I think - there's definitely some history here. Well, back to appeal:

Dear poets, please invent a rhyme or two
On moo, moo cows, that give one jar of milk
Else we will speak with a bark and a ‘bow’
For the English Language is hard without lilt

Utter nonsense, I know. We need a genius who can do something with 4 worded sentences.

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Merry

Sat 05/14/22 05:27 AM

Aatheera is incredibly talented with her creative writing and poetry. Perhaps she could explore and publish such poems.

Poetrywriter probably has a few comical pieces in his back pocket, too.
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jaish

Sat 05/14/22 06:08 AM


Aatheera is incredibly talented with her creative writing and poetry. Perhaps she could explore and publish such poems.

Poetrywriter probably has a few comical pieces in his back pocket, too.


Nursery rhymes stitches nonsense in a way it makes sense. Think over this.
Hey, diddle, diddle,
The cat and the fiddle,
The cow jumped over the moon;
The little dog laughed.
To see such sport,
And the dish ran away with the spoon.
Imagine at 6 years what

This kind of genius, 'moo & moon' so natural;
and while the dog was laughing
his dish ran away with the spoon
Is what makes crows like me,
fall of trees,
Edited by jaish on Sat 05/14/22 06:10 AM
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artRabbit

Sat 05/14/22 06:13 AM


years ago I redid a bunch of nursery rhymes for a show
prolly nought what your looking for though


_moo_moo_cow_milk_
_comes_from_N_udder_
_not_ah_plastic_jug_
_red_cap_
_blue_cap_
_pink_cap_
_every_single_one_
_fill_did_with_crap_
_water_did_down_
_fill_did_
_wid_hormones_
_ah_money_trick_
_ah_body_trap_
_white_potion_
_portion_did_
_for_D_cattle_
_N_package_did_
_N_every_town_
_Ear_D_mommy_is_prattle_
_N_D_morn_N_
_wid_dare_brood_
_from_D_ice_box_
_2_D_counter_
_stand_N_nude_
_where_D_pour_
_ah_bowl_ah_
_sugar_soup_
_date_did_
_N_
_lable_did_
_wid_D_state_stamp_
_cause_every_child_
_must_ave_good_poop_
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jaish

Sat 05/14/22 06:39 AM

Hi Art,

Seems you intended the milk industry


fill_did_
_wid_hormones_
_ah_money_trick_
_ah_body_trap_


And the marketing logic towards the end.

Just a question: Have you visited S.E. Asia?
(Not Japan)
You know, Buddhism, not exactly vegetarianism
still a pacifism that seems to come from chemical free diet. Poor people, no education, no ambition, live in huts where it leaks - still happy.

Serve you tea and you will like it.
winter here, is your summer.
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artRabbit

Sat 05/14/22 08:41 AM

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_nope_
_nvr_been_where_U_say_
_however_would_B_glad_2_share_
_ah_cup_ah_T_
_very_nice_of_U_N_deed_
_eye_would_offer_2_host_as_well_
_perhaps_sit_is_4_
_ah_virtual_spell_
_eye_cook_muh_T_N_ah_pot_
_fill_did_wid_shrooms_
_N_simmer_N_till_hot_
_din_eye_let_M_soak_
_A_lot_
_2_D_
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_echo_N_
_every_thought_
_sent_
_cascade_N_
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_till_where__
_eye_think_of_
_D_time_line_
_when_2_word_is_
_were_1_
_N_D_
_world_Is_
_nought_wan_
_but_fill_
_did_wid_
_hope_

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jaish

Sat 05/14/22 09:01 AM

Had to read it slow.

Some very fine lines indeed
I already know you are a man of deep peace -
haha.


N_D_
_world_Is_
_nought_wan_
_but_fill_
_did_wid_
_hope_


Think over Art. Poems can lift clouds.
Not for Indians - as requested

For all kids - universal.




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jaish

Sat 05/14/22 10:57 PM

We Indians are bilinguals!!

And it's all through school - extra, extraordinary phenomenon that our scientists have not investigated.


Another passing thought...

Sounds and tones in which words are crooned to a baby, these tonal sounds are the first objects a baby recognizes. It is baby music, something he responds to emotionally even before he develops his vision. Apparently, sounds and tones are the bottom most layer in the Temporal Lobe and this maybe Nature’s artful way to provide us with precise control over the vocal cords.

Hiya Blondey, are you there?
Edited by jaish on Sat 05/14/22 11:10 PM