Let's see where i'm screwing up? Am I being to forthcoming and open? Am I forgetting to include something? Let me know ty!

It's a good profile. The pictures are generally clear and you have all the info there, but your headline and blurb seem to drag on a bit.

I'm glad that you replaced the default "Hi.." headline, which bugs me when I see it, though many other people have zero problem with it. However, your headline seems a bit long.

You wrote: "Looking for a loyal respectable woman. i want something real and long-term no games. "if i go crazy, then will you still call me superman?"". You could've stopped at the first sentence, but then you threw in another and then some lyrics from Kryptonite. You do you, I guess, but it just seems a bit too much, there.

Then the blurb. It seems long, too, but also repetitive. Like you found three or four ways to say you're an easy-going guy and you threw them all in there. It's still a better blurb than most I've seen, but it seems to blather. Maybe add some white space between the topics.

Then the pictures. It seems you don't even own a good shirt. It's alright if you're a t-shirt kind of guy, but it wouldn't hurt to dress better for pictures and smile more. Here's a tip: Figure out where the camera lens is and look into it (not the phone screen) when snapping the picture.

Anyway, you seem like a good-looking guy, so you'll probably do alright. But for the profile with a too-long headline and meandering text blurb and photos that could be better, I rate it 7/10.

Good luck!

P.S.: If you want to be a software engineer for the government, you'll need a college degree.

Thank you Mortman for the honesty! I will try to trim it down to be more succinct, because I think you're right. I tend to type like I speak which can be a bad habit.

I don't tend to go for the nice shirts, but I do have some I think. I could bust them out to get a few decent pictures I suppose.

Thanks for the compliments btw! I am currently going for my Bachelors as well. So when I get a chance after this research paper I will try to fix my profile up! Again thank you!

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Dave