I'm looking to connect with a good woman. I want to hear what woman think I need to do to improve my profile.
Also, letting me know how many of you are plus or premium users and if that is something woman want, add features.
You may not like it, but you asked...
I am authentic and transparent. ,,,OKAY
I value authenticity and you being yourself. you already said that above...
I'm not superficial and don't value superficial things... you already said that 2x
I like to have conversations about meaningful things yes, you made that clear...
and look to build a life that has purpose. yes, we get it by now!
I don't play games and don't have time for games. Yes, we REALLY do get it! Overkill
Let's connect on Google chat. Seriously? After that you try to lure women off-site??
In short, you say a lot yet say nothing at all. You keep repeating yourself in different words.
It all feels demanding and way too serious.
Don't you ever have fun and laugh?
My advise: Rewrite the whole lot, make it more lively and fun to read.
(I normally would've left after 1,5 sentence as it's not appealing.)
