Needs a better recording environment, or needs to be equalized after recording in a sound editing program. More difficult to equalize after the fact though.
I like it, and that is saying a lot because it is hard for me to really like acoustic...personal preference and all that. This song reminds me of Aaron Lewis (Staind), in particular his acoustic performance of 'It's Been Awhile.' However, melodically far different, just noting another acoustic song I liked of the very few and one that came to mind while listening to the front-end of this song.
Nice job, can be even better if the recording environment was changed.
i agree..it was recorded in my living room and the acoustics out there suck.....im working on making a better place to record in...think my vocals came out a little high....thank you though.
The vocals squelched in spots from what I heard, which could be fixed with proper sound editing...would just have to lower the decibals until it sounded proper. The guitar hit some squeeky points throughout the song, again would probably have to just edit the decibals...but it would be trickier because you don't want to edit the entire sound from the guitar, same with vocals.
Better recording environment would be my suggestion if you really want to hit it perfectly.