Topic: Another one I wrote.
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shinryu13

Thu 09/03/15 10:33 PM

Eyes


Like little drops of heaven placed in the sky by the angels from up above..

Just a beautiful as the first drop of dew falling from a rose petal...

Shining beacons of light that bring happiness to everyone within their sight...

Just one gaze into those two precious jewels and i could never settle..

As deep as the deepest sea bed and as powerful as the strongest mystic...

One could find them self lost for days with just one glance into them...

With a warmth that of the sun and a passion that of which no man can tame...

Looking deep into them could bring even the strongest man to his knee for more than just a whim..................................
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Ladywind7

Thu 09/03/15 11:58 PM

That was lovely to read :)
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Wed 03/15/23 10:21 AM

Eyes


Like little drops of heaven placed in the sky by the angels from up above..

Just a beautiful as the first drop of dew falling from a rose petal...

Shining beacons of light that bring happiness to everyone within their sight...

Just one gaze into those two precious jewels and i could never settle..

As deep as the deepest sea bed and as powerful as the strongest mystic...

One could find them self lost for days with just one glance into them...

With a warmth that of the sun and a passion that of which no man can tame...

Looking deep into them could bring even the strongest man to his knee for more than just a whim..................................

N:blossom:I:blossom:C:blossom:E :thumbsup:
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JulieABush

Wed 03/15/23 12:05 PM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .