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The Wrong Alice

Mon 08/05/19 10:04 PM

'Twas beneath the shadow of the silvery moon,
Began the realization, of a forgotten buffoon,
Edited by The Wrong Alice on Mon 08/05/19 10:06 PM
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MissT1975

Tue 08/06/19 05:57 AM

That he had lost his way in society
He had become half the baboon that he use to be.

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Poetrywriter

Tue 08/06/19 07:31 AM

He lives each day in loneliness still,
Falling down hard as he climbs each hill,
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Riverspirit1111

Tue 08/06/19 07:44 AM

As he cried out in pain, how do I cope
An angel appeared, planting a mustard seed of hope
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ivegotthegirth

Tue 08/06/19 09:19 AM

And as he cries
He vows to try and try
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steve B

Tue 08/06/19 09:39 AM

Till one day, the little acorn,
became a mighty oak.

should I stay out of this thread?
Edited by steve B on Tue 08/06/19 09:41 AM
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jaish

Thu 08/08/19 01:49 PM


Till one day, the little acorn,
became a mighty oak.

should I stay out of this thread?


ha,ha,ha,ha,ha

that was not me,
was the baboon laughing.
Edited by jaish on Thu 08/08/19 01:50 PM
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jaish

Thu 08/08/19 02:32 PM


And as he cries
He vows to try and try


He vowed 'no more shortcuts,
no tumbling down hills'
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Susan

Sat 08/10/19 11:47 AM

Steve B,
Things were going along nicely, until U chimed in :slight_smile:.
Your response was so funny, I had to laugh. Thank you for that.