Topic: Rate my profile
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Abramelyn

Sun 08/18/19 07:50 AM

Hi! I am looking for fun and some crazy adventures. Can someone please rate my profile and tell me if it´s maybe to much? I am a nice guy and I know what I want, do you thing I have any chances of meeting someone who´s on the same page? I would be thankfull for any piece of advice :)
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Freebird Deluxe

Sun 08/18/19 08:17 AM

Two meaningless pics, I will tell you later and in a language few can understand
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delightfulillusion

Sun 08/18/19 08:28 AM

You need to list your intetests as they tell us more about you.

In your write up all you talk about is sex and your fantasies which will put a lot of ladies off. We want to know about you and what type of lady you're looking for.

As the majority of people here use English, perhaps you can write your profile in English?

I agree with Freebird Deluxe, get rid of the two photos that don't show your face. They could be anyone.
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Abramelyn

Sun 08/18/19 08:55 AM

right guys! thanks :)
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Abramelyn

Sun 08/18/19 09:29 AM

So, what about now, is it better?

Still i find it rather soft, although it´s true, this is much more like me. I am looking for casual things first, but I am opened to anything if things go in the right way. Do you thing that my profile gives that impression now?
Thanks again :)
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Freebird Deluxe

Sun 08/18/19 09:49 AM

That looks a lot better and you can add to it bit by bit ,take it slow on the sex bit or you will get a deluge of hookers and scammers
Good luck
Edited by Freebird Deluxe on Sun 08/18/19 09:51 AM
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delightfulillusion

Sun 08/18/19 10:11 AM

Much better and I'm glad you took our advice.

You can write what you've written above into your profile but go easy on stating you like sex. We only need to hear it once laugh

Good job so far :thumbsup:
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Abramelyn

Sun 08/18/19 10:23 AM

you mean maybe using this sentance "I am looking for casual things first, but I am opened to anything if things go in the right way" ?
THANK YOU :)
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delightfulillusion

Sun 08/18/19 10:24 AM

Yes
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Susan

Sun 08/18/19 01:39 PM

Under Intrests, you list Naked Martial Arts.
Sounds bizarre to me, and a bit unnecessary lol :slight_smile:
It looks good though.