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cowboy

Tue 03/17/20 10:34 AM

The collective angst
Burning my eyes
The corporate dread
Of dire sheep
Dangerous gullibility
Gone to seed
Taking to heart
What takes the heart away from you
Notions of malignancy
Wages of self sufficiency
Paid forward
Carelessly taking care
Of most mundane matters
Ignoring what matters the most
Feeling the heartbeat
Sensing the stillness in the fullness of a breath
Singing not
Yet leaving nothing unsung
The song sings itself
No more monkeys throwing saddles on my back
No tug of war with my yoke fellows
Pulling together at last
The storm blew down the fence that kept us apart.
The veil in the temple torn to shreds by your winds
Blessed are the eyes that are blind
Nothing wrong with being alright
Living while i die while i live
No fish to save from drowning
No clown to save from crying
Adorned with vastness
Clothed with emptiness
Fathomless awareness
Fully alive











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Ladywind7

Tue 03/17/20 09:39 PM


The collective angst
Burning my eyes
The corporate dread
Of dire sheep
Dangerous gullibility
Gone to seed
Taking to heart
What takes the heart away from you
Notions of malignancy
Wages of self sufficiency
Paid forward
Carelessly taking care
Of most mundane matters
Ignoring what matters the most
Feeling the heartbeat
Sensing the stillness in the fullness of a breath
Singing not
Yet leaving nothing unsung
The song sings itself
No more monkeys throwing saddles on my back
No tug of war with my yoke fellows
Pulling together at last
The storm blew down the fence that kept us apart.
The veil in the temple torn to shreds by your winds
Blessed are the eyes that are blind
Nothing wrong with being alright
Living while i die while i live
No fish to save from drowning
No clown to save from crying
Adorned with vastness
Clothed with emptiness
Fathomless awareness
Fully alive














I have not commented on your poems for one reason. Do you wish to know?
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cowboy

Wed 03/18/20 12:05 AM

sure i respect what you have to saywaving
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JulieABush

Wed 03/18/20 04:21 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Ladywind7

Wed 03/18/20 01:35 PM


sure i respect what you have to saywaving



I can not privately message you because of your settings and I am hesitant to post here???

Let me know if it is ok to post here :smile:
Edited by Ladywind7 on Wed 03/18/20 01:47 PM
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cowboy

Wed 03/18/20 02:27 PM

sure you can post here or let me know what settings to change and ill change them. i am new to this and don't understand how it all works quite yet
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Ladywind7

Wed 03/18/20 03:04 PM

:smile: About the poetry. This is only my opinion and you may disagree...
It is awesome, most lines are deep and surprising. I really like your writings.
The only thing is...
It is too busy. You cover so many themes in one poem that the brain is overwhelmed.
I would love to see you have one or two themes in a poem, even if you have to make the poem shorter.
We all think different. I believe if you stick to one topic and stay there, but embellish it with your wealth of metaphors, you will reach people. Because what you have to say is excellent.
I hope you are not offended by my comments, I truly want to help your poems be appreciated more.
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cowboy

Wed 03/18/20 04:56 PM

not offended at all thank you. appreciate your input :smile: I will take what you shared into consideration next time I write
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Ladywind7

Thu 03/19/20 02:36 AM

Thank you. I just wanted to make you the best poet you can be...:smile:
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Unknow

Sat 04/16/22 04:24 AM

I like and understand your writing Cowboy. We all need to have eyes wide open for what's coming.