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Topic: Lonely but with you
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Unknow

Sun 01/09/22 11:59 PM

Where are you?
why you left me?
where I can find you?
When we can meet again?
Lots of question within me
- but am still with you -

Your presence is not there
your fragrance is not there
your smile is not there
- but am still with you -

Am lonely in the planet but
am still with you


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JulieABush

Mon 01/10/22 12:49 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Laska Paul

Mon 01/10/22 01:47 AM



Poetry Writing is not an Easy Task . It should have precision , flow , Creative , Rhyming and Framing . But that does not mean Your Poetry is Bad . There are many Poets here who writes from within the Heart . While reading their poems, it takes us to Disneyland, sorry Fantasy Land.
As a reader I am happy though your Poetry is too short. And as Part of encouragement I will give you 7/10 on scale . You lost 3 marks bcoz your Poetry is too short plus the Topic could have been Simple Yet Sweet .
Hope we all can read a lot from you in the Near Future.
Thank You .. This is Laska Paul .
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Lessi

Mon 01/10/22 01:49 AM

:nerd:
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Unknow

Mon 01/10/22 02:50 AM


Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thank you
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Unknow

Mon 01/10/22 02:51 AM




Poetry Writing is not an Easy Task . It should have precision , flow , Creative , Rhyming and Framing . But that does not mean Your Poetry is Bad . There are many Poets here who writes from within the Heart . While reading their poems, it takes us to Disneyland, sorry Fantasy Land.
As a reader I am happy though your Poetry is too short. And as Part of encouragement I will give you 7/10 on scale . You lost 3 marks bcoz your Poetry is too short plus the Topic could have been Simple Yet Sweet .
Hope we all can read a lot from you in the Near Future.
Thank You .. This is Laska Paul .


Thank you Mr. Laska Paul - Am not a big writer of poems - thanks for your encouragement sure will write a big poem in near future . Thanks a lot
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Unknow

Mon 01/10/22 02:52 AM


:nerd:


I can't understand Ms. Lessi
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Wed 04/20/22 11:30 PM

Where are you?
why you left me?
where I can find you?
When we can meet again?
Lots of question within me
- but am still with you -

Your presence is not there
your fragrance is not there
your smile is not there
- but am still with you -

Am lonely in the planet but
am still with you

N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E :thumbsup:

Loneliness is my best friend.
I don't expect from any.
That's the reason of Happiness..:eyes: