I just want it straight and honest
Decent enough start
But maybe use some punctuation, it would make it a wee bit easier to read.
Larsi, fussy
Doesn't matter what you write on your profile, creeps and scammers will always come after you
Being a night auditor sounds easy. Poke head out of the door, look up in the sky, see it's dark: yep, it's night! Job done.
"GODISNOWHERE"
What did you read????
God is Now Here OR
God is No Where
Read Life as it comes
Straight and Honest ..
Best of Luck 2U..
As other said, ditch the photoshop pictures unless you don't want people to see you for some reason. Your choice.
The name "Sadeyes" seems negative to me. So it might scare off some people who do not want to deal with someone with depression or what ever makes you call yourself "Sadeyes". If you have depression, I am not saying to hide it...just not throw it out there before they actually get to know you.
The last thing that jumps out at me anyways is the writing. A dating profile is like a job resume, not a quick text between friends. So write out your words like an adult, use punctuation and decent grammar.
But the positives are that you actually did write a little bit about yourself, that is a step above at least half the real profiles on here. Your pictures might be altered, but at least you do have some.
But with any suggestions, just do you because in reality that is what you are trying to advertise here. Good Luck
I just want it straight and honest
the shortest path is the straight one
I just want it straight and honest
me too.
Okay.
1. Start your own topic. Don't dig up a month old one.
2. Not much else to "rate" other than photos, and this ain't a "how photogenic am I?" contest.
Your main prole picture would be much better if you smiled, or at least did not show a grimace.
And, your text is terrible, to be honest. It is like a series of short text messages, but without punctuation between them, even that is difficult to tell. As another said, at least you wrote something, but what you wrote is difficult to read.