Topic: Viking and the Little Alpha
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Unknow

Mon 08/22/22 09:53 AM


Whispered thoughts
Leave
Residue
Incased in spiders web.

Hope flutters
As heart's
Rhythm
Beats upon
Its shrine.

Bound bloody upon
Gossamer wings.



22 August 2022





Edited by Unknow on Mon 08/22/22 09:54 AM
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JulieABush

Mon 08/22/22 12:39 PM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Riverspirit1111

Mon 08/22/22 12:49 PM

I Love it!! :heart:
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technovative

Mon 08/22/22 01:02 PM

An image rich expression that is a treat to read, Storm.
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Unknow

Mon 08/22/22 02:18 PM

Thank you, everyone.
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Devo1974

Mon 08/22/22 03:24 PM

Very impressive Storm!! :thumbsup::thumbsup:
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Unknow

Mon 08/22/22 04:02 PM

Thanks Devo.
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Poetrywriter

Mon 08/22/22 10:36 PM

I don't usually comment on poetry but I love this Storm!
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Laska Paul

Mon 08/22/22 10:55 PM



When did you start writing Poetries StormMessages.
I never knew about your Talent that you have kept hiding within you . I hope other poets read this and give their valuable COMMENTS !! That's All from me right now . Keep Writing .!!
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Mon 08/22/22 11:28 PM

Whispered thoughts
Leave
Residue
Incased in spiders web.

Hope flutters
As heart's
Rhythm
Beats upon
Its shrine.

Bound bloody upon
Gossamer wings.



22 August 2022

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Unknow

Tue 08/23/22 01:36 AM

Thank you, Poetry.

Hi Paul. Ive been writing since I was 12-13. The death of a friend twas the catalyst. Thank you for your comments.

Thanks Robin.