Topic: Eat or be Eaten
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technovative

Wed 10/12/22 06:16 PM

Galloping galleon bucking gales
drowning stallion trotting water,
humpbacked whales
swimming swift from slaughter.
Command chain rift, mutiny bound
scuttled cutter sandbar aground.
Hagfish and squid, krill and flounder
dorsal fin rising circles around her,
chubby sailors splinting the keel -
she ain't built like Noah's ark,
great white hunters in search of a meal
their quivering blubber now food for a shark.
Edited by technovative on Wed 10/12/22 06:38 PM
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Thu 10/13/22 01:55 AM

N:blossom:I:blossom:C:blossom:E :thumbsup:
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JulieABush

Thu 10/13/22 03:12 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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technovative

Thu 10/13/22 08:41 AM

Thanks for the support guys.
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Unknow

Thu 10/13/22 01:04 PM

eat
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Nick

Sat 12/10/22 01:29 PM

Nice. I like the flow of your poetry.
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technovative

Sat 12/10/22 08:19 PM

Thanks Nick, I appreciate it.
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Sun 12/11/22 06:33 AM

Nice. I like the flow of your poetry.

Yes, an in flow you forgot to wish happy birthday to @Techn....