Topic: 🖤😄Imagination😄🖤
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Sun 11/13/22 12:53 AM

:heart_exclamation:HEART:heart_exclamation:

Don't Ask Me Anything
My Mood Is Not Fine__eaa.

A Incident Happened Today,
The Heart Got Crack__errr.
:broken_heart:

The Day Was Refreshing,
Setup Of With Mind__aaa.
Thinking For A Glance,:thinking:
Suddenly Clicked Brain Winds__aa

Decided To Go Out For A Walk__aa
Their Was A Bus Stop,
Just Nearby The House__aa
Opened The Door
And Stepped Out__tttaa.

The Sunlight Little Bright,
Felt Like Reddish Sight__aa
Between Monsoon Peaks,
Wonder Like Rain__sss
Still Made Up Mind Sharp,
Won't Carry Umbrella Aside__ee

No Idea,
What's Gonna Happen Next,
In Short Period Time___mm:stopwatch:
Just Ahead Of Little Distance,
As The Leg's Left Right Pass__ess.

In Few Moment Of Walk__kk
Reached Opposite Street__tta
By Facing Was Bus-Stop. :bus:
Eyes Gotta Rocks__sss
Seeing A Beautiful Girl,
Standing Alone, Very Nice__ee.

Watching The Beauty,
Full Offf Glance_ee:nerd:
The Eyes Over Beauty,
With Musical Trance__aa.:notes:

All Of Suddenly
Thunder Got Strikes__sss
Skies Up Charged,
Rainfall Took Starter__rrr

Slowly Her Dress Got
Covered Up By Rain Drops__ss Beauty Got Load Water Coloured Float,
In Glancing Dress Spice__cc

Looking Her From A Miles,
Into Her Eyes & Smiles__ss
Decision By Heart,
Don't Mess-Up The Chance.
Decided To Acompany Her,
With Dancing Road Cross__edd

Tragedy of Life__faa
As Happiness Short Size__aa
Crossing Street Reached Bus-Stop__paa:bus:
We Only Two In Sequel__sss
Suddenly Came Villain On A MotorBike__aaa:motorcycle:
The Beauty Sat With Him Holding Tight__tth:rage:

In A Minute Of Wise__eee
Flew Away With Glides__ss
Mood Off Of Heart__aa
Along Left Moment Of Thoughts__ss🖤

Don't Ask Me Anything
My Mood Is Not Fine__eaa.

Funny Short Pocket Story
Of :heart_exclamation:HEART:heart_exclamation:


......Robin :eye::hole::eye:
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AαƚHҽҽɾα

Sun 11/13/22 01:47 AM

Well written Robin :sparkles:
Looks like a rap song too :clap:

Bringing in humour along with the flow isn't easy, you've sequenced it well :sunflower:
I enjoyed this :cherry_blossom:
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Vibes

Sun 11/13/22 02:10 AM

Imagination
Nice in narration
Clear in composition

Starts with exhilaration
Ending in exasperation

Thoughts of orientation
True with determination

Based on beautification
Bounding in inspiration

Good write☺
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Sun 11/13/22 03:43 AM

Thank:blossom:You
:cherry_blossom:Aatheera:cherry_blossom: & :cherry_blossom:Vibes:cherry_blossom:
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Laska Paul

Sun 11/13/22 08:23 AM



I know you have taken good effort in writing this poem.

In Short and Sweet words :

YOU MADE MY DAY ...!
That is Why I Call it " A BEAUTIFUL SUNDAY " .
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JulieABush

Sun 11/13/22 01:43 PM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Sun 11/13/22 10:01 PM

Thank:blossom:You
:cherry_blossom:Laska Paul:cherry_blossom: & :cherry_blossom:JulieABush:cherry_blossom: