Topic: Pothole Puddles
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technovative

Thu 12/15/22 11:14 AM

Upturned canoe held above
it serves to deflect a thick skull's
punching glove
as it shields from the sky that rains.
With a circling motion
the dull throbbing drains
from the horseshoe imprint
stamped on my gut,
oars propped up a lumbered strut.
My walking stick stuck in a crack
sidewalk stampedes
would've broke my back
if it weren't for this flipped over boat.
When I reach the shore
with the vessel I tote,
curved side down it's a floating umbrella
pothole puddles
ain't gonna drown this fella.
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JulieABush

Thu 12/15/22 12:06 PM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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technovative

Thu 12/15/22 02:27 PM

Thanks for having a look and taking a moment to acknowledge what I shared, Julie.
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Thu 12/15/22 10:11 PM

U:blossom:N:blossom:I:blossom:Q:blossom:U:blossom:E :thumbsup:
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technovative

Fri 12/16/22 05:31 AM

Thanks, Robin.
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mig25

Fri 12/30/22 09:47 PM

Another great poem!!!!
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technovative

Sat 12/31/22 03:04 PM


Another great poem!!!!


Thanks for your kind feedback, poet.