Topic: Open My Hand
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mig25

Mon 01/02/23 07:38 PM

Open My Hand

I reach out
grasping for the wind
in hopes of capturing
just an inkling of hope
to hold
as tightly as I possibly can
so that
I could believe
the impossible

That
I could breathe again
that
the nothingness
of the air
could be held
as tightly
as the love
that
was no longer there

I want to be foolish
but I know
that
should I open my hand
it will be as empty
as my arms
that
once held her
it's just
that
I need an inkling
of hope
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AαƚHҽҽɾα

Mon 01/02/23 11:46 PM

Beautifully expressed :sparkles:
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Vibes

Tue 01/03/23 12:53 AM

The feel of wanting
Ray of expectation
Penned in aspiration

Nice poem
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JulieABush

Tue 01/03/23 03:04 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Unknow

Tue 01/03/23 08:03 AM

The after effects of love linger on... while those we love move on. Your poem was heartfelt.
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Unknow

Wed 01/04/23 04:01 AM

As always, beautifully expressed.