I’d really appreciate honest criticisms and opinions, especially with suggestions for fixing or improving. Please, let me thank you very much, in advance, to anyone who might try to help me out here. Very truly, DirtyDancer

Your entire profile is about sex. If that is what you want.....

I will complete the sentence .
If that is what you want ... You will never be able to reach the destination safely..

In one word; terrible.

The part that said "This daddy got to get a pretty baby girl... (blah blah blah)" made me laugh out loud.

Not a great profile at all. The images and introduction hits an all-time high level of cringe. The positive is that I enjoyed the comedic side of it all, although I don't believe that that was your intention...

Your name about says it all to how your profile is going to be. I looked and I was right. Profile is geared more for a sex site than a dating site. The ladies with class on this site will look the other way.