Topic: Vows of Ten Fingers held in ❤
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AαƚHҽҽɾα

Sun 05/07/23 02:10 AM

Ten painful scars of yours,
Deeply cut into mine as my vows,
Stitching your soul onto me as a strongest thread,
To complete your wounds within me for all you suffered!

Nine promises of mine,
Carved in your soul with my strongest spine,
Preciously covering you within my bone's marrow,
To make my presence drilled within you to kill the sorrow!

Eight knots of my wishes removed from my heart,
Freeing some space to drench your anger in my heart's part,
To lessen the gaps created each time,
Through insecure assumptions thus avoiding the ego to climb!

Seven ribs of mine,
Carefully rests on thine!
Warming your cold lonely veins,
To give you the courage while you endure pains!

Six fears of mine,
Plunged into your brain,
Making you remember the moments giving me restlessness,
Enabling you to surround me during insecureness!

Five minutes of our warming smooches,
Making our lips moisturized with those tempting kisses,
Makes the distance look less,
Covering the miles between us!

Four eyes like swords,
Watching each other without words,
Kindling the craziest touches,
Giving us the warmth of our breathe amidst the arguments heated so much!

Three knots you made in my soul,
As a sign of our bonding as a whole,
Completes our togetherness with a knotted permanent thread,
Tied on my neck during our wed!

Two bodies of us,
Forms one soul within us,
Holding my breathe in you,
Keeping your heart beat within me to nurture our love's glue!

One unique love of understanding,
To accept our differences by withstanding,
Adding more years,
Teaches us lessons in many ways,
To widen one's arms around another,
Ignoring the arguments,
While making solutions workable to heal the disappointments,
By being kind to the love deep in our souls,
That brought together from different parts of the world!

- Aatheera
(Meaningful love gets depicted from the depth of the bonded souls during the moment when his fingers and her fingers remain held together during happiness and sorrow)
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JulieABush

Sun 05/07/23 03:07 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Laska Paul

Sun 05/07/23 09:31 AM


I have nothing to say !!!!!!!!!!
'Just Amazing' . In one word if I Sum it, its called
"Speechless " I'm ...
The most important thing in this Poem is , there is not even a Single Spelling Mistake and not even Edited it . That's Great! A Wow Factor .
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AαƚHҽҽɾα

Mon 05/08/23 12:39 AM

Thankyou Julie and Paul ..
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Unknow

Mon 05/08/23 07:37 AM

Nice