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Eein

Thu 06/29/23 11:20 PM

A beach at sunset.
A girl never met.
Her eyes are as a radiant blue diamond
sparkling with reflections of the light and memories of a man she hasn't met.
Wondering where he is, as she contemplates her life and hart in a world gone astray.
She longs for him to appear and bring the wonderment she desires.
Her world is fading.
The light is dimming.
In the distance she sees him.
She starts running to him.
The light fades more.

In a house somewhere. A man wakes.
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Vibes

Fri 06/30/23 12:03 AM

Nice writing
Good start and best end
Let the dream come true
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JulieABush

Fri 06/30/23 01:06 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Blondey111

Fri 06/30/23 02:01 PM

Serendipity :heart: I love this !!!
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Gia

Fri 06/30/23 09:13 PM

Beautifully written. :two_hearts:
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theresa

Wed 07/05/23 03:51 PM


A beach at sunset.
A girl never met.
Her eyes are as a radiant blue diamond
sparkling with reflections of the light and memories of a man she hasn't met.
Wondering where he is, as she contemplates her life and hart in a world gone astray.
She longs for him to appear and bring the wonderment she desires.
Her world is fading.
The light is dimming.
In the distance she sees him.
She starts running to him.
The light fades more.

In a house somewhere. A man wakes.
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theresa

Wed 07/05/23 03:52 PM

This is a magnificent and inspired poem.
thank you,
theresa