Topic: jimminie crooked
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Solito Gonzalez

Thu 08/03/23 04:34 AM

I am that little voice that gives you every reason to not do well in school because well let’s face it you don’t need to know how to spell correctly to be able to cash a check written to you for doing some pretty shady things in the comfort of your own home .
Math is hardly important, no more complicated problem solving, you will find in no time how much money you have left when you can’t buy things anymore or how many true friends stuck around after the party stops. Remember the most important lesson, if you can count , do not count on others.
Can you still hear me deep inside your ear drums , right next to your consciousness and self consciousness ! It’s me jimminie crooked! Just call me J.C for short ! We go way back ! Remember that time when I bet you, you wouldn’t sleep with your best friend’s fiancé to prove they are not trustworthy! You lost that bet and lost a best friend all in 1 hrs
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technovative

Thu 08/03/23 10:36 AM

The clever title got my attention. The stream of thoughts flow well in this expression. As a poem, I think it would read better broken into shorter lines and stanzas.
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StormMessages

Fri 08/04/23 02:22 AM

Thank you for sharing.