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mig25

Wed 09/06/23 06:48 PM

If Only for a Moment

She purposely
left
the image of her breath
on the window

She knew
it would disappear
in a matter of minutes
but wondered
if only for a moment
those few minutes
could be the lifetime
her soul
desperately needed

Nothing good
last
forever
yet
everything painful
never leaves

She sighed
and left
her longing
on the window
foolishly believing
that time
played the music
the rain
and her soul
danced to

Death
was as eerily silent
as the morning light
hidden
behind the clouds
an empty feeling
filled
with more emotions
than love could ever speak

She sighed
and missed him
as the image of her breath
reminded her
that she was still alive


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technovative

Wed 09/06/23 07:50 PM

A treat to read, Mig, expertly crafted writing.
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JulieABush

Thu 09/07/23 02:21 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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StormMessages

Sat 09/16/23 06:07 AM

I relate to this on multiple levels.
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AαƚHҽҽɾα

Tue 01/09/24 08:35 AM

If Only for a Moment

She purposely
left
the image of her breath
on the window

She knew
it would disappear
in a matter of minutes
but wondered
if only for a moment
those few minutes
could be the lifetime
her soul
desperately needed

Nothing good
last
forever
yet
everything painful
never leaves

She sighed
and left
her longing
on the window
foolishly believing
that time
played the music
the rain
and her soul
danced to

Death
was as eerily silent
as the morning light
hidden
behind the clouds
an empty feeling
filled
with more emotions
than love could ever speak

She sighed
and missed him
as the image of her breath
reminded her
that she was still alive

I could feel the emotions this adorable poem can bring to me with the memories..

Wonderfully written and it's depth could be felt :ribbon:
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Laska Paul

Wed 01/10/24 06:41 AM


Your poem takes me to another world . Its peaceful .
Some lines of this poem is written so beautifully , while some areas need a Little more Improvement .
keep up !