Seaside Romance
I see the ocean,the stars,and the moon.
The wind begins to dance as it brings
me your perfume.
I see the sand,the shells, and the
gleam in your eyes,while i become helpless,
water drips down your thighs.
[At that point we hug and then we embrace in a kiss.]
I feel your warmth,the wind,and the
oceans cleanseing mist,all the while my
hearts pounding, by the passion of your kiss.
I feel your love,and the waves from
the riseing tide, than you say to me,
lets find a place to hide
Imperfective Poetry
Mr. 123 , I would say improve your clarity of words .
I like the ebb and flow of the poem.
Thanks for sharing.