Topic: Last song I wrote before marriage
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Chqinitout

Wed 10/18/23 08:16 AM

Time moves on in different colors
But they're really just shades of blue
And all my inspiration
Walked out the door with you

Feels like everyone's laughing
At the clown with the tears in his eyes
If he could only get up off the floor
Wouldn't they all be surprised

Don't try to help him up
He'll only pull you down
Then you'll just be part of the show
Just another lonely clown

(Corus)

What makes a man a clown
And what makes a boy a man
And how do you stop the rain
When here it comes again
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Toodygirl5

Wed 10/18/23 11:33 AM

Nice
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JulieABush

Wed 10/18/23 01:50 PM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
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Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ

Fri 11/10/23 05:38 AM

Time moves on in different colors
But they're really just shades of blue
And all my inspiration
Walked out the door with you

Feels like everyone's laughing
At the clown with the tears in his eyes
If he could only get up off the floor
Wouldn't they all be surprised

Don't try to help him up
He'll only pull you down
Then you'll just be part of the show
Just another lonely clown

(Corus)

What makes a man a clown
And what makes a boy a man
And how do you stop the rain
When here it comes again

N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E :thumbsup:
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Unknow

Fri 11/17/23 06:10 AM

Awesome you should put it to music.
Back in the day on here you could write a song and post a link to it to share. I don't think you can do it anymore tho. ABRACADABRA did it a few times. He was a great poet and song writer. Although I do admit he was so well educated that I had to keep a dictionary by the computer just to look up the words so I could understand what he was saying laugh laugh laugh.
Great man I hope he's doing well in life.
Here's to you and him drinker drinker drinker