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7Kate7

Thu 05/01/08 02:45 PM

Its the sweet sister adding to the posts!
Perhaps the number of pages will grow?
Nay, swell even or balloon in size
Until its more than doubled on page 25
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lurchs_sister

Thu 05/01/08 02:48 PM

Kate you doll
there with your horse
we talk in code
though it's not morse

This post will grow
and double in size
Frozn started this
he is so wise

What do we do
on days like this
share with eachother
our personal bliss
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7Kate7

Thu 05/01/08 02:58 PM

Near my horse is where I truly love to be
Nothing like the country to make you feel free
Whether its riding or teaching her circus tricks
I have the only horse in the barn who can fetch!happy
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wyatt1844

Thu 05/01/08 06:47 PM

What a sturdy and magificent steed
With great care you'll groom and feed
Running free many eyes will catch
The only horse who will play fetch
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Michelle_1982

Mon 05/12/08 02:04 PM

I know that it has been nearly two months
I see that people are still posting
I have been trying to find my paths
Without any luck but hoping

How has everyone been
All is fine and and dandy here
Has anyone figured out how to win
Without having to use a spear


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s1owhand

Mon 05/12/08 06:36 PM

here i am
ax in hand
life surrounding me
challenged again
again and again
pursuing frivolity

look hard and you cannot
fail to find it
it is here
don't you see
fool honesty
alongside bravely fear
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FroznChild

Thu 05/15/08 12:05 PM

Serious serious serious it seems,
is something that we all are not.
For the words that we write,
and the rhymes that we make,
seem never to go to pot?

(Not that some of us haven't now and then)
taken a drug to act like a friend...
but a friend that leaves us in the blink of an eye...
when the party has run dry.

That is why I count on my friends,
who keep this thread going when I am not here...
So many talented people I see...
and so many have I came to hold dear.

I've seen even the small ones, poets that is,
who had not a word to rhyme when they started...
why, within just but a page, their rhyming is now sage...
and the flow from their lips, was soon parted.

Male, and Female, girl, and guy,
maybe even a transvestite, or a unic or two,
have stopped to help these rhyming words,
stick to our memories like glue...
(Least, I hope it's glue)
eewwww....

The rules of this thread are so very simple...
although the concept may not be as much...
To make every line, or every other, rhyme,
isn't as easy as such...
no... it isn't as easy as such...

But that's a suckers bet,
that I won't except yet.
I'll take my rhyming scheme,
and turn my words into a dream...

A dream that invites my other friends along...
To join on these pages, their rhymes, in a song...
With,
They Lyrical Response Post...
Man, you just can't go wrong.
or, Woman, either, for that matter...
Just come along with me,
and soon you will see...
You're Rhyming With FroznChild,
Father, of the Mad Hatter...

What kind of rhymes will come are way today?
Something serious, as it be what may?
Or maybe something a little more Risque?
Something Romantic, and sexy, persay...

Persay... That's a word pun you know...
Persay like a kitten, just spelled wrong...
but so... I like the way that it runs from my lips,
how the P to the er to the say,
how it drips...

Lmao... I better pass this on to somebody knew...
and see what kind of rhyming,
anyone/everyone can do.

It's simple as always, just try to make it rhyme,
and you could stick so gentle with meter and time...
But it's really not necessary, as long as you try...
Come along, tell a story,
let your poetry fly...

Lets see who can impress "us" the most...
With the response that they give,
On the Lyrical Post.
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LAMom

Thu 05/15/08 01:30 PM

O' Lookie It's Frozn aka Mad Hatter
Spilling his Heart and soul to those with Chatter
I love this Guy,, He a big Hunk
Where'n his Hat hoping for Good Lunch
I suck at this Rythming The words seem to fail me
Guess I'll go back and work on the Siding
Painting the House, Bathrooms are done
Got the Den a Shade of Tan will do
Daniel's Room is filled with Black and Hue of Blue's
A splatter of Red or Two
So off I go to finish this Job
Brush in hand, hair in a bun,,
Got me some paintin' to get done
Hmmmmmmm maybe a Rainbow
No don't think that will go
Sage in the Bathrooms
Soft Beige in the Big Room
Ohhhhhhhhh ponder me thoughts
So many Colors fill my Rainbow
Whoshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I go
I tip me Hat to the Mad Hatter
Glad you Home givin ya big hugs
Ya big ole Luggggggggggggggg bigsmile flowerforyou :heart:



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